BF & GF adventure shorts 2 Has the pottential to be really funny, but it has some room for improvement. Here are my ideas:
The first sound effect of the Angry Birds should have a bit more of a build-up, and the rest of the sounds just feel a little out of place over a static image.
Having BF lip-sync or cycle between his note poses might enhance the scenes.
When GF is sad, try putting an effect on the screen like a shift to monochrome or a sad rain effect.
Those are my suggestions. Overall i think character movement is the biggest problem. Keep up the good work though! Remember this is all my dumb opinions, so feel free to improve however you like. You're on your way to greatness, my friend.
